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satisfaction

July 31, 2014
By juliehugbear BRONZE, Deltona, Florida
juliehugbear BRONZE, Deltona, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont cry because its over smile because it happened


we all have a hunger for satisfaction

and once we get it we can never get enough

the feeling it gives you

the taste of it is so sweet you can hardly bare it

the way it feels when its in your
grasp

you wear it proudly

but the satisfaction doesn't last forever

the satisfaction soon fades and we starve for it

the taste becomes bitter

the feeling of gravity failing comes to you as it leaves

you no longer feel proud


The author's comments:
this is about wanting to feel satisfied. to feel proud and the way it makes us feel

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on Aug. 13 2014 at 3:31 pm
juliehugbear BRONZE, Deltona, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
dont cry because its over smile because it happened

thank you so much for the comments and rates

on Aug. 12 2014 at 6:45 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

Yeah I agree with Emily ^_^ This poem is simple but so true. Satisfaction sometimes becomes the air we breathe and that we cannot live without or get enough of it. So yup I'd say you're defenitly right. Great job and keep up the writing I see a lot of potential here ;) Thanks for sharing this :D No Doubt 5 stars!!

on Aug. 7 2014 at 8:53 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I find thsi true. This is a beautiful poem full of raw emotion and so honest. Thank you for sharing this.