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No more pain.
February 6, 2015
Tears not seen
cries not heard
cheeks are wet
wrist is wetter
pain,pain filled with pain
blood means pain
but so does tears
if only you knew
if only you saw
if only you heard
this life is ignored
pain,pain filled with pain
blood means pain
but so does tears
blood on the floor
blood on the wrist
blood on the blade
lifeless girl on the ground
pain,pain no more pain
blood was pain
and so was tears
no one heard
no one saw
no one knew
her life never existed
pain,pain no more pain
blood was pain
and so was tears
© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico
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rick123 said...
on Mar. 9 2015 at 7:22 pm
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WitchBitch said...
on Feb. 26 2015 at 6:02 pm
I agree with @MrPickering the repetition just seems to add something to it for me, I'd call it beautiful but its too twisted for beautiful, it's more...shocking and honest.
MrPickering BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2015 at 2:48 am
I like the use of repetition and unusual utilization of punctuation. Well done. I enjoyed your poem. :)
I was going through a tough time when i wrote this.