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Saying what I can never show ..

December 3, 2008
By ilu4everx97 BRONZE, Gouldsboro, Pennsylvania
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Grass stains on my knees and some bruises on my heart.
They say time heals everything, but where to start ...

Loving you ain't the issue .. it's simply admitting it .

Maybe I've been hurt one too many times ...
Or maybe trust doesn't fit in this love story rhyme.
Those walls of mine.. oh, those walls of mine...
They keep you out, and I know it hurts.

All I want is everything, but even that's not enough.
Relationships are supposed to be hard, but ... this rough?

Complication is my form of protection.
It's hard for me to feel safe and give out affection.
Maybe this is my way of saying what I can never show.
Because really .. loving you is all I'll ever know.

© Alexa T., Pompton Plains, NJ

The author's comments:
This is from the bottom of my heart. I have a tough time telling people how I feel. Especially the people who care for me too. This is just my way of getting it out there. I love you.
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Brokenorbitt said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 9:39 pm
Brokenorbitt, Posserville, Illinois
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oh how i can relate. i have ruined so many relationships with people b.c i can't show how i feel or open up.
this is very good. (:
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND said...
on May. 27 2011 at 11:52 am
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND, Auburntown, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Are We Happy Plastic People"- Casting Crowns "While we're sung to sleep by philosophies that save the trees and kill the children" - Casting Crowns "It's such a secret place, the land of tears"Antoine de Saint-Exupery

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This is me down to a tee. I LOVE this poem. Good Job :)
crazybutweird202 said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:54 pm
crazybutweird202, Blacklick, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye only makes the whole world blind.

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Love your poem its filled with emotion and love, hope u keep writing :)
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on May. 2 2010 at 3:33 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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awwww thats REALLY good. u get a gold star:DDDDDDDDD
Philip_Hart BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 11:56 am
Philip_Hart BRONZE, Olathe, Kansas
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Very good natural flow. Some of me can really understand this. Keep up the natural flow. You are really good at that. :) Could you look at my writing? Thank you so much.
ThunderLovestheRain SILVER said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 8:20 am
ThunderLovestheRain SILVER, Brookhaven, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t fret when it rains on your parade...just learn to dance in it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Be yourself...everyone else is already taken.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Speak your mind, even if your voice shakes.&quot;

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I understand exactly how you feel..

That was great!

I loved how it flowed out naturally..

more??? :)
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 2:55 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
chocoholic93 said...
on Feb. 3 2009 at 12:44 am
aw grace nice job (:

you're a great writer!
kianapearl said...
on Jan. 26 2009 at 7:25 am
This is beautiful and extrememly relatable. Do us all a favor and keep writing!:)