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Picking Flowers

September 9, 2015
By izzoemma SILVER, Burlington, Kentucky
izzoemma SILVER, Burlington, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"You have many years ahead of you to create the dreams that we can't even imagine dreaming. You have done more for the collective unconscious of this planet than you will ever know." -Steven Spielberg


Yesterday you liked daisies
In a field of daisies I was a rose
Now when you see them your eyes turn glazy
People change that’s just how it goes

In a field of lilacs I was a daisy
Today all you looked at were those soft purple petals
People change that’s just how it goes
I guess you like them now because they are gentle

Today all you looked at were roses
Remember when I was red and sweet
I guess you like them now I suppose
I tried to put on a sheet

Remember when I was red and sweet
Now you only look at greens
I tried to put on a sheet
I guess you didn’t like flowers by any means


The author's comments:

This was actually a writing assignment to try writing a Pantoum, as you can see it mostly follows the rules. I was inspired to use the flowers when I saw other non-human things being described like human (e.i. colors, weather patterns).


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