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Misses Disease

February 16, 2009
By mcbob_kool SILVER, Monticello, Indiana
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Please misses disease
your nimble fingers, withered from days of aching and whining
oh please misses disease
all of my love is found vicariously
from lovers and the way they touch
all of my sardonic humor will last me no longer
for i am the being i've come to despise
I am the man whom all should not converse with
I am the man who is alone in the universe
so please misses disease
take me
kill me
but come with me
so, at least
you and I shall live out eternity
me, and you
you and me
I shall be devout to thee

© Marieta S., Pleven, Bulgaria

The author's comments:
i think this was a song, originally....now it's sort of that broken heart syndrome poem....i think it's ok.... it's not as long as i'd like it to be, but it's straightforward, so it's OK....i'll have to find some of my older work...this is juvenile, really, in retrospect...
matt
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KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 12:55 pm
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;I\&#039;m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can\&#039;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don\&#039;t deserve me at my best.\&quot;<br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe<br /> <br /> Imagination is more important than knowledge...<br /> Albert Einstein

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i think that this poem has a very deep, underlying meaning to it. good job !
AndreaD GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 10:41 am
AndreaD GOLD, West Chester, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
According to Greek mythology, humans were originally created with four legs, four arms and a head with two faces. Fearing their power, Zeus split them apart, condemning them to spend their lives in search of their other half.

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this is a poem that you have to disect to find its meaning. i really like it! :) it's intriguing.
dot.! BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2009 at 3:43 am
dot.! BRONZE, Acworth, Georgia
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thats juvenile?? well i loved it! i want to read more!! please check out my poem too, its TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/86470/Somewhere-Away/ thanks!!
jellyinthesky PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2009 at 9:54 am
jellyinthesky PLATINUM, Renton, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;wow, you have a shit-ton of cheese.&quot;

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i am in love with this. if this is the juvenile side of your work, i wait in anticipation of the rest.
xjustlistenx said...
on Mar. 1 2009 at 6:14 am
it may not be shakespeare (or in your words juvenile :D) but i thought it was really good it had a nice vibe to it id like to see what other poems you have written