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Yesterday's Tomorrow
February 21, 2009
i'm here to see another day
to save another life
to fix all that's broken
never say goodbye
i try and try
and never win
but i know that today is the day
that i will succeed
i will win
you will be proud
and everything will go on about
it's like nothing ever happened
that it was all make believe
it's all right in front of you
why can't you see
close your mind
open your heart
and then, then you will see
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lovevball said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 4:55 pm
http ://teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/177425/I-Am-the-Dawn-of-the-Universe/
lovevball said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 4:54 pm
yeah well like i said it told me that it was already accepted. and when i go to my works it tells me that people have rated it and viewed it. i will copy and paste the link so you can see it.
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:00 am
It does take forever for them to accept!!!! I have to agree on that one!!! lol
abstractminded GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:36 am
kinda sorta
lovevball said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 3:12 pm
oh.. it said that it was posted and other people have already read it and rated it.. how did you try to find it? because if you just click on my name then it should be there..
in this poem, i just really like how it ends, and just the whole thing is a really great message for life. :)
in this poem, i just really like how it ends, and just the whole thing is a really great message for life. :)
abstractminded GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:55 am
for about 5 years
abstractminded GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:27 am
not yet i will and u do the same for me and tell people and rate them ok
lovevball said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:42 pm
I mean what you think of it or if there is anything i can do to improve*
lovevball said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:41 pm
This is absolutely amazing!! i really really like it! Could you look at my poem "i am the dawn of the universe" and tell me what you think o if there is anything i could do to improve. :)
abstractminded GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:02 am
yesterday's tommorrow
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