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The Sweetest Form of Suicide

March 31, 2009
By genesis27000 SILVER, Mexia, Texas
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By love forever bonded

I love you he says, getting on one knee

Excitment Rushes, she knows she has responded.

To her heart she found a key, which is he.



Time passes,

He comes home later, making up excuses.

To her, he becomes a facist.

Her trust he abuses.



At night, her tears are her only company.

She is done with this tyranny.

Throws herself off the balcony,

Surrounded by Death's symphony.



Forever is taken lightly.

I love you are only words.

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ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 4:13 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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Gah! Its painfully beautiful. :) It hurt me to read this. But I like it.
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on May. 29 2010 at 1:16 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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I remember when you wrote this. It is very powerful and happens all the time. The last verse is one of the truest I've ever read. You are a great writer.
J.R.Hensel BRONZE said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 4:06 pm
J.R.Hensel BRONZE, Mexia, Texas
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This is a great article and it honestly suprises me that no one has commented yet. I applaud the author of this peice and I'm proud to say I know her personally.
minne10110 said...
on Apr. 10 2009 at 4:00 am
OMyG!!!! Geni, i love it! Its so true! You just dont get that kind of love anymore! You dont here "Its our 50th anvesry" Its gwed, i like it! It makes sense and very true to how fake people can be and how sometimes love wont always be the same as it used to be! I love you Geni! It was radiant! :]