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Every little detail

October 6, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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Every little detail
comes to mind so clear
every word you've said to me
is whirring in my ear.
All those little heartbreaks
All the times we spent
is prominent inside my mind.
I wonder where you went.
It used to be so easy
but now I know It's lies
So I will be indifferent
as we say our goodbyes.

© Lena K., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
Not a creative topic. It's about a breakup essentially but I like it a bit nonetheless. It could really help get through a tough breakup I think
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loveibanez BRONZE said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 4:55 pm
loveibanez BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
4 articles 1 photo 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on!" -Ben Franklin

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I quite agree, and it flows fantastically, not to long and not to short.
hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 2:52 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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thank you!
hello.beautiful PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 11:18 pm
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch— and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

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i love the simplicity of this. it's easily relatable. and it puts a fresh-twist on an overused, and commonly cliche topic.