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Simple Love

February 12, 2010
By Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
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I love you in the rain,
when you've left and walked away.
I love you when my hearts in pain,
from those so longed words you wouldn't say.

I love you on the street,
where we used to take our walks.
I love you where we used to meet,
in the woods beneath the stars.

I love you when you don't love me;
though i wish with all might you would.
I love you with everything I have in me,
afraid to open up because you never could.

© Tiffany L., Yelm, WA

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Bobbi PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 12:57 pm
Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
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I think everyone some what has the same idea of what it is, but percieve it differently.
Kumanga DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 11:14 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

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i feel that we're like the same bout love.. but maybe everyone is the same bout love, lol maybe not, cuz they take thei love differently, right? heh
Bobbi PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 4:36 pm
Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
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awww well thank you. and I'd love to check out your work :)
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 12:45 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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amazing piece :) you captured all the emotions of love pefectly, and you wrote with such emotion! the reader can easily relate :) bravo! would you mind checking out some of my work? i would love your opinion :) keep writing!! i like your style ;)