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Not Enough

February 20, 2010
By HannahJane SILVER, Woodbrige, Virginia
HannahJane SILVER, Woodbrige, Virginia
7 articles 3 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Maybe its not my weekend but its gunna be my year-


Has there ever been a time when “I Love You” is not enough?
When words can not describe all the crazy stuff
These feelings in my heart that make me want to scream
And the ones that pull sweet memories into my dreams
My head is full of the love I want to give
But that word isn’t strong enough for the way I live
My heart beats a song that only I would know
One that has a melody with a special glow.
It beats to the timing of every breath he takes
And to the blinks his eyes that sparkle like lakes
There is still a time when “I love you” is not enough
It is now with all this crazy stuff.


The author's comments:
I still love him... but hey that word isnt enough

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Milo! said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 4:25 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

on Mar. 3 2010 at 5:24 pm
HannahJane SILVER, Woodbrige, Virginia
7 articles 3 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Maybe its not my weekend but its gunna be my year-

She (I) Like Love him but I dont have the words to describe it its just too much to explain

on Mar. 3 2010 at 5:13 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

this is really good. I really like it. im just a bit confused. is she saying she misses him, wants to be with him, or is angry with him?