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God Forgive Me...

December 11, 2010
By peachy37 BRONZE, Opelousas, Louisiana
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peachy37 BRONZE, Opelousas, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The ones we love never truly leave us.&quot; --Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> &quot;The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes but in having new eyes.&quot; --Marcel Proust

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God forgive me,
For I have sinned.
Let myself go…
Let the devil win.
Fragile. Thin.
That’s all I need to be.
To be happy.
To feel free.
Never ending.
Constant cry.
Leave me alone.
You wonder why.
God forgive me,
For I have sinned.
Today I tried.
It came back again.

© Greg K., New Lenox, IL

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peachy37 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 17 2011 at 4:39 pm
peachy37 BRONZE, Opelousas, Louisiana
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The ones we love never truly leave us.&quot; --Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> &quot;The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes but in having new eyes.&quot; --Marcel Proust

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Thank you!
Duckie430 said...
on Jan. 17 2011 at 4:13 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger.&quot;

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i love this poem, i feel like i can relate...this is so sad but so beautifully written.
peachy37 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 17 2011 at 1:53 pm
peachy37 BRONZE, Opelousas, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The ones we love never truly leave us.&quot; --Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> &quot;The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes but in having new eyes.&quot; --Marcel Proust

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Thank you so much!
Arielle Lyons BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 9:12 pm
Arielle Lyons BRONZE, Chesapeake, Virginia
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This is sad and to the point and perfectly describes what I think you're talking about. Don't give up hope. Know that God loves you and that you are already a conqueror through him. :)
Lexie566 said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 7:01 pm
Lexie566, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game,&quot; sounds chessy but its the quote that has gotten me to were i am today

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this is amazing, i love it. breathtaking