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Sun didn't shine

May 1, 2011
By GrangerDanger BRONZE, Jaipur, Other
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Reach for the sky, even if you can't touch it, you'll be an arm's length nearer.

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It was a dark day, need I say more.
Just the memory, sends shivers to the core.
You were there, and so was I.
Wonder what went so wrong..
Why the screaming?
Why the curses?
What happened to those love songs?
But I guess, some things are never meant to be.
And that's what they'll say, about you and me.

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

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Allis-in-Wonderland PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 12:06 pm
Allis-in-Wonderland PLATINUM, Cartersville, Georgia
38 articles 1 photo 63 comments

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&quot;Sometimes people leave you...halfway through The Wood. Do not let it grieve you...No one leaves for good. You are not alone, for no one is alone.&quot; -Into The Woods

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Yeah, at my school I'm the fruitninja! haha it's so cool right?! But I thought it was extremely good and you should keep writing!
GrangerDanger BRONZE said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 5:58 am
GrangerDanger BRONZE, Jaipur, Other
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

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Reach for the sky, even if you can&#039;t touch it, you&#039;ll be an arm&#039;s length nearer.

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Thankyou so much FruitNinja :D
This means alot to me! 

Getting complimented by a ninja xD I am SO motivated to write more :D

Allis-in-Wonderland PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2011 at 9:16 pm
Allis-in-Wonderland PLATINUM, Cartersville, Georgia
38 articles 1 photo 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes people leave you...halfway through The Wood. Do not let it grieve you...No one leaves for good. You are not alone, for no one is alone.&quot; -Into The Woods

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it's NOT BAD! And don't say your work sucks! I thought It was very good!

 

GrangerDanger BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 6:57 am
GrangerDanger BRONZE, Jaipur, Other
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reach for the sky, even if you can&#039;t touch it, you&#039;ll be an arm&#039;s length nearer.

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Some feedback, please :) 

And please check out my other poem too. This one's not too good, I know that. Wrote it after a bad day. Kinda autobiographical. :/