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How A Teen Feels..

September 19, 2014
By HafsaAhmed PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
HafsaAhmed PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t believe in angry arguments , I believe in silent revenge.<br /> <br /> Revenge doesn&#039;t merely means hurting others, it sometimes mean being a better person than you were yesterday.


That girl whom you just called fat in the hall,

She daily sees her skinny future in crystal ball.

 

That shy boy with glasses whom you pushed with hate,

He hid his tears wishing friendship to be in his fate.

 

That popular girl with gum you think is fake,

She is afraid her heart might again break!

 

That nerdy girl with dirty dress you looked down upon,

She works hard to see herself in doctor's gown.

 

That girl you considered ill-mannered seeing her in anger,

She weeped all night cursing her bad temper.

 

That punk who seems so rude, wicked and cold

His mother died when he was barely six years old.

 

Tired, I'm thinking how a world would be better

If atleast for once people had felt for each other.

 

If looks, dresses, style wouldn't have mattered

Trust me! no heart would have scattered!

 

But if you see a teen, stop judging for their sake

This teenage is quite tough so ignore their mistakes

 

Judge only by heart, I beg you please

On top of that, know how a teen feels!



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on Sep. 23 2014 at 10:56 am
HafsaAhmed PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t believe in angry arguments , I believe in silent revenge.<br /> <br /> Revenge doesn&#039;t merely means hurting others, it sometimes mean being a better person than you were yesterday.

You are right :)

on Sep. 23 2014 at 10:55 am
HafsaAhmed PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
22 articles 2 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t believe in angry arguments , I believe in silent revenge.<br /> <br /> Revenge doesn&#039;t merely means hurting others, it sometimes mean being a better person than you were yesterday.

Thanks a lot for your feedback :) Yes, most of the times we do judge people by their looks without knowing what's running in their lives

on Sep. 22 2014 at 9:33 pm
fluteprincess352, Tavares, Florida
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I love this poem because it makes people think about the way they treat others. A lot of people will do harm to others for maybe just their appearence or their actions but, they have no idea what's going on in the inside. The person you are mistreating could be suffering on the inside and be longing for your friendship instead of your hatrid. Treat others the way you want to be treated and you will be treated the same. Just don't judge others or how they act because you don't know them enough to be judging them in any way. 

Veronica said...
on Sep. 22 2014 at 9:11 pm
I love this poem because it makes people think about the way they are treating others. You don't judge a person just by their appearence or thier actions because you have no idea of what is going on inside. Some people go by this: Treat others the way you want to be treated. When we hear or see this it makes us think that if you want to be treated a certain way we have to treat that person the same way so think about it, what goes around comes around so treat someone in a bad way and you will be treated exactly the same way so this poem makes a lot of sense you do not judge others by appearence or actions because inside they could be suffering and could really be needing that friendship instead of that hatrid. Treat others the way you want to be treated because you do not know that person enough to judge them in any way!