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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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michaela mrianda BRONZE said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 6:33 pm
amazing poem ... just great i love reading it from time to time
NonexistentRemedies BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:45 am
I love how this poem can relate to 99% of the girl population. There's so many guys out there that are jerks and so many girls fall for them.
ForeverFlirty22 said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 1:17 pm
I love it! So true! It says what so many of us think. Just great!!
AstronutKid said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:32 pm
Whats your # writingchick
jollyfriend said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 10:31 am
Amazing where did u cme up wth tht
writingchick GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:43 pm
I especially love the first 8 lines of this. They are absolutly genius and so original! :D
laurensoccer SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:00 pm
I love this poem!!!!!! It has a great flow of words. Your personality is easily seen and relatable. Keep writing!!!!!!!!
ginger1993 GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 6:16 pm
most guys now a days! i loved it!!
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 3:50 pm
oh! and if you hated it so much, why even bother to comment on it? If anything your comment doesn't make sense! :)(:
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 3:46 pm
Don't be a jerk! ha ha! :)(:
YurFutureAuthor68 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 2:29 pm
Pretty good. I like it mostly because of the picture 'cuz i love my cowboys ;) but it rhymed some of the time and then kind of faded away, I really like the concept and can tell that you put yourself into the writing, very good just make sure that its not the stereotypical poem about that boy that broke my heart kind of thing. Its very good though. You can tell that this poem is personal so just be careful that people MAY critique negatively, but to me once again, it is pretty good, but I love these somewhat lovey dovey poems :)
loverofroses said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 2:24 pm
i know right! i loved how the words flowed fantastically without rhyming to excess and such
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 2:07 pm
dopeeeee .
MarleyRainbow PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 12:58 pm
i shows what you like while all the same time telling him that he is a jerk. I really enjoyed it.
DifferentPerspective. SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 10:44 am
Its pretty good, I can understand the perspective of it all. REALLY AWESOME!!!!
Sweetie2toCute SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 10:40 am
I Like This Alot. It Made Me Smile. Its Touching.
sHEbeLIEveD BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 9:03 am
This was good. Like Cjjeanne said, a little choppy. You need to work on your flow a little but otherwise, this is really good.
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