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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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leah said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:25 am

I loved this story! its just amazing very good. What great writer!

:D


DyLaN lAmPoS said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:24 am
I <3 Leah!

on May. 12 2011 at 8:23 am
Awful story. it needs alot of work, i hated it.
- Chloe Welsh

on May. 12 2011 at 8:22 am
good story. sorta.

chloe said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:11 am
Chicken Noddle soup.

RueLove BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2011 at 7:58 am
RueLove BRONZE, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I gonna hug you!&quot; -Gir

I love it. This is how I feel. This guy has me wrapped around his finger and he doesn't care if he hurts me. I love this poem and you go on with your work. It's amazing. :)

Malsie8 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 12:25 am
Malsie8 GOLD, Placentia, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us&quot;<br /> -Lord of the Rings

loved it :D

genesis c said...
on May. 11 2011 at 8:57 pm
i really love this! i

on May. 11 2011 at 5:32 pm
NothingSpecial BRONZE, Conifer, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
They teach us to stand out; yet they smash us into groups; they teach us to be happy; yet they demoralize us as life moves on; they teach us to listen; yet they ignore our questions; think about it. The teaching and learning system is screwed up.

I love this poem so much!!! In a way it kinda makes me laugh inside! But i love it!!!

on May. 9 2011 at 2:07 pm
katibug919 BRONZE, Red House, West Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Me? Sarcastic? Im way to ditzy to grasp the concept of mockery&quot;

This is about the most amazing poem ive read on here so far! I can completly relate....Guys are jerks in SOOO many ways and yet....You still fall in love. I love it!!              and if you would, check out my poems. I have one on here similar...

on May. 9 2011 at 9:44 am
CrystalMarie GOLD, Steubenville, Ohio
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This is really good!

on May. 6 2011 at 1:41 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 231 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone.&quot; anonymous

very, very good, and well writen. but don't take my word for it--you're in the magazine! check out my poems sometime, too.

on May. 5 2011 at 2:13 pm
Ayeee, this was really good. I read this aloud to my class right? And they loved it. Good Job! Seriously, write more. Buhhh Byee. I love you<3 We should sooo chill sometime.

on May. 5 2011 at 2:11 pm
Daniosopuppy BRONZE, Sarasota, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;They say love is in the air so... I hold my breath till my face turn purple.&quot;-Lil Wayne

I am in love with your poem no joke! I show it to like everyone! It completely describes this guy that i know(; ahhh<3 legit this is Perfect<3

on May. 4 2011 at 5:31 pm
brithers BRONZE, Telford, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;It&#039;s a metaphor, see: You put the killing thing right between your teeth, but you don&#039;t give it the power to do its killing.&rdquo;

I love this!!! sooo good :)

on May. 2 2011 at 3:40 pm
SavvyCake1 SILVER, Florissant, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Light up the darkness&quot; off of the movie I Am Legend

i like it. i think its great.

 


on May. 1 2011 at 12:55 pm
PrettyLittleDarling SILVER, Taylorsville, Kentucky
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sweatpants, hair tied, chillin with no make up on, that&#039;s when you the prettiest, I hope you dont take it wrong&quot; Drake

this is the perfect poem for me your writting just spoke everythink my heart is saying :) amazing

on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:17 pm
FacebookAddict11, Grandville, Michigan
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I love this one, good use of rhymes by the way, Keep up the good work

on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:48 am
Rachael12 BRONZE, Michigan
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Great ending!! I really enjoyed reading your poem :)

KitKate BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:38 am
KitKate BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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SOO TRUE! I can relate as well! nicely worded:)