i love this one as well. it's interesting to see your theme of writing. we cant tell if you write of a missing lover, friend, or family member, but we can feel your hurt. great job!

this is really thought provoking. on one hand, you could be talking about a lost lover. on the other, this could be about/for anyone you love--a friend, family member, anybody. The closing sentence is also interesting- usually, someone says 'i hope we meet again'. you, however, confront the strange reality of life and time, and hope that you have the privledge of sharing time with someone. You are a seriously talented poet, its so very clear that your soul has been through a lot of trauma for being 13-19 years old. Please, continue writing, continuing living and putting it into words. The world needs to hear your voice, kid.