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A Chill

April 29, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
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WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

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"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

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My pain scatters,

Piercing the bone,

Chilling my heart.

I want to be good,

But I can't be.

All hope is lost,

But I won't give in.

The battle I fight,

Is one I must do alone.

For I fight myself,

The dark side of me,

So listen close.

Remember me,

But I mustn't let,

Anyone in.

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The author's comments:

This piece is about that feeling of hopelessness where you think you alone must fight that battle and it's not to make you sad but remind people that when your being mean, think about those less fortunate and remember that some people are hurting and you may be hurting that person.

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This article has 9 comments.

CaliFranceGurl648 GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2022 at 5:56 am
CaliFranceGurl648 GOLD, San Diego, California
11 articles 1 photo 125 comments

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“I am a California girl, born and raised, so flip-flops and cutoff shorts are my go-to look."<br /> <br /> – Meghan Markle

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I like tis
WolvesRain ELITE said...
on Dec. 1 2021 at 9:18 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

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Thanks!
ForgottenEcho PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 9 2021 at 8:08 pm
ForgottenEcho PLATINUM, San Diego, California
22 articles 0 photos 21 comments

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sanity is overrated.

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Oh wow--this is amazing! You're a very eloquent writer. It expresses a lot of emotion while staying concise & simple. You sound very professional. xD
WolvesRain ELITE said...
on May. 7 2021 at 7:23 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

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@wondermahima Thanks! I work hard on these and I really appreciate the comments
wondermahima BRONZE said...
on May. 7 2021 at 6:15 am
wondermahima BRONZE, Chennai, Other
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Dare to Dream Big.

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Your writings are so deep and cool!
WolvesRain ELITE said...
on May. 5 2021 at 12:51 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

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Yeah, it can be
Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 5 2021 at 12:44 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

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Yer right in saying that the biggest enemy you often to have to face is yerself.
WolvesRain ELITE said...
on May. 4 2021 at 7:36 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

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Thanks for the advice, I will take that into mind.
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on May. 4 2021 at 2:10 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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cool, you actually know what your writing abt and why(:
it is rly cool tho. maybe rephrase the last lines, its somewhat confusing when the end should be the most powerful and well worded part.