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Believe Me

May 6, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
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WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
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"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

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No one believes my pain,

They only push it away. 

I cry out for help: only ignored,

I say it hurts they say liar. 

Do as your told and her honest,

But how do I when I am already?

Please I beg believe me please, 

Before I’m lost to sea,

Sea of brokens like me. 

I see the door shut so find a way,

I see the window shut so now what? 

Look for an opening,

Make your move quick. 

Or you will always hurt,

Mental from no belief in you.

© Juliana E., Walton, Kentucky

The author's comments:

This piece is about how sometimes our cries of pain are ignored and said to be just there to get attention and how we as teens sometimes think it has gone to long so we end it ourselves because we are lost and broken.

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SparrowSun ELITE said...
on May. 16 2021 at 9:04 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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that was great, constructive critism: after the sea of brokers like me, you ould rephrase the following. its like right next to being editors pick, I think the lines after sea of brokers like me is just dragging it down. maybe the problem is it doesn't align with the rest of it.