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The Waterfall

May 12, 2021
By AngelMuneton BRONZE, Sacramento, California
AngelMuneton BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I just have always felt as long as I’m 100 percent honest, then it’s just me. It’s a lot easier to sleep at night that way.” – Mac Miller


Blue as the sky, tall like the world's greatest wall, 

It's nothing like you've ever seen before


A waterfall


There's big rocks and trees all around the mountain 

The water looks clear and you can feel the breeze 

The air smells fresh like you’ve been inside all day and haven't came out

It's the sight of peace and you will never want to look away


Mother nature has you trapped into her work of beauty 

No computers, No phones, No internet 

No more worries, life is like a wild animal in there 

Just the feeling of being free for once 


A memory that you will never forget,

a memory you dream about every night,

and a memory that reminds you of who you are

It's more than just a waterfall


A place where you can relax and remember about those memories

A place that you go when you miss the feeling

A place that you feel safe and sound during your worst times

A place where the walls never closes in on you


A waterfall.


The author's comments:

This is a poem I wrote in class. At first it was just school work then I started to get more into the poem as I went along. I chose this one out of all the other ones i wrote because a lot of us are going to read it in different point of views. It's not something I want to say, it's something I want you to think of and understand. Thank You for reading and please let me know what you think.


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on Mar. 2 2022 at 4:30 pm
Me2008 PLATINUM, Houghton, New York
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And one day, the girl with the books became the woman writing them.

Wow! This poem is really beautiful! I love all the images you create with words, it's really stunning! Would you mind checking out some of my poems? I really need feedback!

on Mar. 2 2022 at 4:50 am
aalaazah1 PLATINUM, Colombo, Other
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where words fail music speaks <br /> success is a journey, not a destination<br /> <br /> when you feel your best, everybody else can feel it too - ARIANA GRANDE<br /> <br /> If you are able to look yourself<br /> in the mirror every day<br /> with the decisions that you make,<br /> that's where power starts - SELENA GOMEZ<br /> <br /> Before you judge people judge yourself - ZAYN MALIK<br /> <br /> haters will say what they want, but their hate will <br /> never stop you from chasing your dream- JUSTIN BIEBER<br /> <br /> If you follow your dreams, <br /> it means you follow your heart.<br /> if you do follow your heart, <br /> I don't think you can go wrong- CELINE DION

this poem is phenomenal... I love the way you describe the waterfall and the surrounding...

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on Mar. 2 2022 at 1:09 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Angel, this is a wonderful-written poem...The anaphora makes it really beautiful...