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Where Life Ends

October 14, 2021
By emily12305 BRONZE, Davison, Michigan
emily12305 BRONZE, Davison, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"All good ideas arrive by chance" (Max Ernst).


Depression looks like a dark cloud

It blinds you from seeing the grace in things

It slashes your eyes from the light in the world


But no one will help you


Depression feels like a prickly cactus

Everytime you try to grab onto something true, it impales you

It never leaves, always thirsty for pain


The tears pour in a never ending stream


Depression smells like rotting flesh 

It keeps getting worse and worse until nothing’s left

Nothing can stop it except amputation

But your brain gives you the wrong sensation 


You sit in your room writing that letter, praying and hoping that you’ll get better


Depression tastes like salt water

It continues to make you thirstier the more you drink… yet you can’t help it

Even when you get some fresh water, the salt lingers in your veins


You open that pack of razor blades, you count many pills you need to drown


Depression sounds like a war on man

Guns and bombs detonating around you

It will deafen you with no shame

You can only hope to escape this prison alive


But before you know it, you’re gone.


Depression is a heartless thing

But it doesn’t have to be so

Ask for help

I promise you’ll receive it.

Don’t let that 911 call be the end.


The author's comments:

Hi, my name is Emily. I usually don’t write poetry but this is definitely my favorite poem I’ve ever written. I feel like I really captured what a poem is. I deal with anxiety and quite a few of my family members suffer from depression, so in this poem I really tried to dive into the deep and dark thoughts of depression. I started with giving depression 5 senses that humans have and what those 5 senses are when you suffer with depression. I ended up adding lines in between each stanza to tell a story of the stages of someone who wants to go through with committing acts of suicide. I wanted to end the poem with a gleam of hope to show that suicide isn’t always the best option.


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