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The weight of our lives

November 12, 2021
By poetstears GOLD, Columbus, Other
poetstears GOLD, Columbus, Other
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We trudge along the paths to our futures

Weighed down by the expectations,

Of our parents, our peers, and our teachers. 

All of us from different nations,

But alike in our distress


The road ahead is shrouded in fog,

And no eyes that live can pierce it,

We ourselves have created this smog,

 Of indecision and broken spirit,

Of forgotten joy and peace. 


The author's comments:

The things expected of us can really weigh us down.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Nov. 18 2021 at 8:28 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Nice one...I like it...Keep writing...

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