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Pop Rocks

February 14, 2022
By EmmaSimmons BRONZE, Lantana, Texas
EmmaSimmons BRONZE, Lantana, Texas
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Pop Rocks dance in my mouth,

popping and fizzing 

sending tingle-tangling

sugar drops to my 

white glass teeth


Sweet like young love,

the reds and pinks 

of Valentines day gifts,

little fireworks dissolve

on my tongue. 


Crystals of red cherry 

resemble ruby gems,

before sticking to my 

stained lips.


Nectarous and new,

each whiz and fizz

sends electric waves

of flavor and sensation.


The crack and snap 

of garnet gleaming joy 

is my beloved 

candy crystalline confection.


The author's comments:

I felt like people are often sad on Valentines day, so I decided to try to make it more fun and happy in my poem. I hope that people feel happier when they read it.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Feb. 19 2022 at 11:38 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

This poem is really beautiful and I'm sure that it made the hearts of many POP with joy...Good work getting this on editor's choice...❤