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September 16, 2022
By EmilyTheKiwi PLATINUM, Flemington, New Jersey
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EmilyTheKiwi PLATINUM, Flemington, New Jersey
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“Picture a wave. In the ocean. You can see it, measure it, its height, the way the sunlight refracts when it passes through. And it's there. And you can see it, you know what it is. It's a wave.<br /> <br /> And then it crashes in the shore and it's gone. But the water is still there. The wave was just a different way for the water to be, for a little while. You know it's one conception of death for Buddhists: the wave returns to the ocean, where it came from and where it's supposed to be."<br /> -The Good Place

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hello tomorrow,

how have you been?

look at what i have done today.

are you proud

just as i am?

i long for you tomorrow,

i dream of you when my head hits the pillow.

yesterday is gone

so is my sorrow

i drift off

thinking

of

Photo by Priscilla Du Preez on Unsplash

The author's comments:

One of my favorite things about poetry is rhyme scheme. There are so many fun things you can do with it, and I always enjoy setting up rhymes that purposefully fall flat. Maybe to some it is unsatisfying, but I think it draws a lot more attention to the writing and word choice. Also, in the context of this poem, it feels kind of playful.

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