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Crush, Crush, My Secret Love

September 28, 2009
By TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
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TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
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"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

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I stand around the corner,
What seems to be a life time,
Cute and funny you stand there with friends,
Seeming to shimmer in the light,
Breath, breath, calm down,
Steady my beating heart,
But here he now comes,
Walking straight to the corner at which I stand,
The butterflies soar,
My stomach dances,
My courage is high,
I am ready to speak,
But he keeps passing me by.

© Garrett M., Port Angeles, WA

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Ali.B GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 1:52 pm
Ali.B GOLD, Lexington, North Carolina
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I write whatever flows from my fingers- AJY

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thanks i need all the help i can get.
TJ21992 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 11:26 am
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

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"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

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THanks and just let me now when they send it back and I will definatly read it
TJ21992 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 11:26 am
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

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"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

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Thanks alot, I like being able to relate things with people. It helps us all understand each other better
TJ21992 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 11:25 am
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

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"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

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Yes that is so true.
Ali.B GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 7:16 am
Ali.B GOLD, Lexington, North Carolina
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I write whatever flows from my fingers- AJY

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this is really pretty. i think explains how alot of people feel. i posted some stuuf and when the people send it back you should check it out.
INnaturegirl GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 1:05 am
INnaturegirl GOLD, New Albany, Indiana
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"To me frealess doesnt mean living without fears, its not bing completly unfaraid. To me fearless is living inspite of the things that scare you the most." ~Taylor Swift

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... i think every girl could relate to your poem... everyone of us has felt invisible @ some point
qt0518 said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:30 pm
i love it the ending was awesome....i can relate to this poem
hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:21 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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I know! But sometimes you just get it right
TJ21992 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:17 pm
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
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I did and there good. Keep writing please you have some great feeling in what you right
TJ21992 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:14 pm
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
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"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

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Thanks that made my day. I am so wearing a smile. I'm just glad people enjoy my stuff!!!
TJ21992 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:13 pm
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
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"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

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Thanks I am glad you like it! Poetry is hard to nail.
hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 4:51 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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This poem just made my day! I love it
Deverie♥ said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:33 am
That was amazing. I love the ending. You should honestly keep writing. I will totally read it. :)
shakedra<3 SILVER said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:04 pm
shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
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WOW..that was really good

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