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October 17, 2009
By LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
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LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
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"Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death"

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The apples on a apple tree may change color, they may fall, but my love for you will never change and if you should fall I will always be there to catch you

© Kevin G., Atlanta, GA

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I was thinking about nature show its love to things around it and how it relates to how people show there love for things around us
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Inkspired PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 2:59 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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This was a really good idea, but I think you could improve the wording slightly. Right now it's just a run-on sentence with a spectacular, stunning meaning. Perhaps you could at least make it flow a bit more, if not elaborate?
LadiesMan PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:10 pm
LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
41 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death&quot;

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thank you I appreciate it
LadiesMan PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:10 pm
LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
41 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death&quot;

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thank you I appreciate it
INnaturegirl said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 6:55 pm
it was so short but it said everything!!! very beautiful
BrooklynnBlue BRONZE said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 6:36 pm
BrooklynnBlue BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
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This was short but really good
LadiesMan PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 2:10 pm
LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
41 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death&quot;

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please vote for me thank you