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Help!

October 18, 2009
By WeepingWillow SILVER, Needham, Massachusetts
WeepingWillow SILVER, Needham, Massachusetts
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to light one candle than to curse the darkness.


Help.
Behid my skin I'm melting,
Deep pools of empty tears.
Each passing sun and moon alike,
Are not but simple naked leaves,

Insignificant.
Carried by the wind,
My stolid face apears each wake, no sign but thinned on out.
This guise suffocates the rose inside.

Welting.
Dark abyss secludes the sun,
My thoughts seem dispersed.
Rainbows start but cease to end.

Hopeless.
I cry for you to help me,
My body ties it down.
Prisoner within a swollen heart.

Help.
Please someone let me out.
Help Help Help
The word won't pass my mouth.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem the Summer of 2007

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BABe724 BRONZE said...
on May. 20 2010 at 8:28 pm
BABe724 BRONZE, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...It's not to late it's never to late. No one will ever see the side reflected and if there's something wrong who would have guessed it..."

let me fix that i do care what he thinks but he is soo overprotective.

BABe724 BRONZE said...
on May. 20 2010 at 8:27 pm
BABe724 BRONZE, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...It's not to late it's never to late. No one will ever see the side reflected and if there's something wrong who would have guessed it..."

can't tell u that. my dad saw what i said to u and he didn't like it, aparently, but i really don't care. U should check out some of my poetry. i posted 2 yesterday and i just jioned yesterday too, so yah. i would like to hear what you think about it though, just send me a comment later please, i need to give my dad a few days to cool off first, thanx!

on May. 19 2010 at 7:43 pm
WeepingWillow SILVER, Needham, Massachusetts
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to light one candle than to curse the darkness.

yah I think that is the best thing about writing, how old are you?

BABe724 BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2010 at 7:33 pm
BABe724 BRONZE, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...It's not to late it's never to late. No one will ever see the side reflected and if there's something wrong who would have guessed it..."

I'm like your undiscoverd clone even though I'm a bit yonger than you. i write about things i can't talk about. it's comforting to see that i'm not alone in this world.