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October 20, 2009
By whiterosebeauty GOLD, Ashburn, Virginia
whiterosebeauty GOLD, Ashburn, Virginia
17 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?\&quot;<br /> or<br /> \&quot;Some books are ment to be tasted, others to be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested\&quot;


There are so many thoughts to choose from
So many feelings to sort through
Do we ever really figure ourselves out?
Maybe you tell yourself
That your life is under control
Maybe not thinking about it
Is the only way to make it throught the day
Or maybe
It's just easier to forget

Now what if those walls crumbled
The barriers destroyed
And those thoughts
Those feelings
Came back to you
Flooding your mind

Have you taught yourself how to swim
Or would you be carried away by the current
And drown in your thoughts
Your emotions
Everything you tried to hide
But in the end failed
Faltered behind that well crafted mask

But in the end
Don't we all?
How can we truly think
That something so real
So true
Can be hidden forever?

Eventually
Those walls will crumble
The barriers will be destroyed
And the flood will come
Have you taught yourself how to swim?


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on Mar. 29 2011 at 12:02 am
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
34 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

This is deep! It reminds me of a friend I'm worried about... Especially the part about not being able to hold back anymore, the walls breaking down, the flood.

I'd love to have feedback from someone who writes as well as you do. If you get a chance, please take a look at my poetry!


on May. 26 2010 at 8:49 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

ooomgggg love the ending!!!!!!!!!! the whole thing was fantastic

on Dec. 8 2009 at 3:45 pm
whiterosebeauty GOLD, Ashburn, Virginia
17 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?\&quot;<br /> or<br /> \&quot;Some books are ment to be tasted, others to be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested\&quot;

Thank you =)

on Dec. 7 2009 at 10:47 pm
I like this one the best of all your poetry.