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October 21, 2009
By chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
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chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
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The world is your oyster, and the universe is a fish. <br /> -Me

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Stolen look pass the time.
Catching.
Cheeks flaring.
A silent plea,
Ignored.
Waiting for him
To talk.
Silence.
How could he put a veil
Over what he felt?
How could she adore him,
When all he did was lie?
Priceless words wander.
She fights in the battle of love.
But does he?

© Megan G., Aberdeen, SD

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My own personal experience. It sucks a lot. Enjoy!
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FlamableFyre DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 22 2009 at 9:04 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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That was amazing!
chetahgirl20 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 11:51 am
chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
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The world is your oyster, and the universe is a fish. <br /> -Me

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I am aware that my poem could be better in ways, but I wrote this while I was in my class looking at the one I love. It is a true and honest poem, and those are the same questions I was asking myself in class.

Thank you for replying.
EdytD SILVER said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 4:20 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I like the idea here, and the emotion is very clear, but I think with a bit more imagery, and fewer rhetorical questions, the poem could be stronger.
colorfulldinosaur said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 11:30 am
colorfulldinosaur, Rosemount, Minnesota
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Awsome :)!