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Our Story MAG

October 23, 2009
By caramelz. BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
caramelz. BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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do i have to spell it out for you ?
you should know the ending of the story by now.
we co-authored this one for a long time;
completed it together with plot
twists and unexpected mental
attacks on the main characters
but the ending was your decision alone.

i don't want to make this a series
with cliffhanger endings and negative
foreshadowing. too bad for us, you
chose to write in pen on our rough draft.

white-out won't work on this one.

endofstory.


The author's comments:
I wrote this August 15, 2007. I was fourteen going on fifteen. My friends like this one alot, so I decided to post it here. Leave comments but keep in mind this was two years ago.

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on Mar. 1 2011 at 2:31 pm
HannSawyer15 BRONZE, North Brunswick, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"I say... lets speak it. Lets fight it. Lets write it. There's nothing to hold on to if it's already gone."

Very simple... yet truly amazing?

 

Awesome combonation! You're a great writer!


on Mar. 31 2010 at 5:04 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.&quot;<br /> -Ghandi

I like this!