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October 23, 2009
By noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
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noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
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I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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Frozon ground chrunches beneath my feet. The sun is warm, but not warm enough to thaw the earth. The sky is shamlessly blue, not one cloud remains. My breath turns into little white clouds before my eyes. Words fill my head but I'am as empty as the sky.

© Joseph B., Mesquite, TX

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It was a cold day this february, and I was just walking then I looked up to the sky and it was the perfect shade of blue, and I thougth it should be noticed.
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noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 3:36 pm
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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Umm, Milo, how do I read your stuff. What's your teen ink name?
noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 3:33 pm
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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I'm so glad' and thanx.
noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 3:27 pm
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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It gives me immense pleasure to know that someone appriciates my art. Thanx 4 U'R comment. And I'd be happy to look at your art. :)
shelterisland GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 7:09 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

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wow i really love this!!! :)
Milo! said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 6:26 pm
Wow. It’s impossible not to b in love with this. It’s truly amazing. It really captures the emotion you’re trying to convey. Keep writing, because I want to see more. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:10 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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Its still as good!

I enjoy reading your work!

noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:07 pm
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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I do, but this is one of my first poems. I was still getting the hang of it.
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 4:50 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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Sounds great!
noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 9:27 am
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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Well I've read every thing you've got, and I'll continue to read your future work. :)
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 8:57 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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great!

and ur very welcome
noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 7:42 pm
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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Thanks!!! I will:)
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 3:55 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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But you still do great! sometimes short stuff have so much meanings!

Check out my work ;)
noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:42 am
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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I know I've looked back at my work and I've seen that same thing, so now I'm fixin it. Thanx 4 th tip.
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 4:03 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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u know what i love about ur work.. its how u write about whatever it is that ur eye have cought.. open thing thou.. try writing longer stuff.. gr8 job!