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Eternal Seams
November 1, 2009
I...
faded away
(that lone lost day)
I...
turned to my past
(nothing to say)
I...
heard my faint name
(discretely pained)
I...
wallowed estranged
(scattered astray)
I...
clinged to my dreams
(eternal seams)
I...
wished to redeem...
© Olivia E., Alto, MI
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This article has 21 comments.
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 8:58 pm
Thank you! I would really appreciate if you could give me some more feedback on my other work. Comments like these just really boost my confidence. Thank you!
CletusTheCool GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 5:06 pm
This poem is really good. It usually takes more words to describe things clearly. In this case, I think, the use of less words makes it better. good work.
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 2:41 pm
Thanks!...
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 10:50 pm
AWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 2:31 pm
Thank you, thank you, thank you. !
CuteCourt101 SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:48 pm
I love this poem .. your poems are amazing! They are really great!!
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 9:27 pm
Thank you!
japsystarr SILVER said...
on Jan. 12 2010 at 9:24 pm
i love it =):
5*s.....most definately original...i wish my poems were as original as yours(LUCKEEEE)
5*s.....most definately original...i wish my poems were as original as yours(LUCKEEEE)
4everluvjc BRONZE said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 10:20 am
Wow. I really liked this! You're a great poet.
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 2:54 pm
Hey <br />
I told you I would Comment ^.^ <br />
I rele lyke the format of the poem <br />
its great =p<br />
I really enjoyed it.<br />
Lovely poem darling =]<br />
XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx
I told you I would Comment ^.^ <br />
I rele lyke the format of the poem <br />
its great =p<br />
I really enjoyed it.<br />
Lovely poem darling =]<br />
XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx
beth.j.r said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 7:27 pm
I was the one who accidentally gave this a one star review. Sorry, I meant four stars. This poem gave me a deep feeling of hopelessness and fear of being lost forever. Is that what you were after? It's channeling Poe, for sure..."The Bells" Is that what his poem, similar to this is called?
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 6:04 pm
Thank you so much. You're more than welcome. :)
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