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November 6, 2009
By shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
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A giant ball of fire shining in the sky
Slowly lowering as the day ends

The sky looks like an art project from 3rd grade
Different colors placed at random yet looking great

The sun slowly disappears under the horizon
My art project disappears too

What’s left is a shiny sliver of silver light
And sparkling stars everywhere

The sky has changed in a matter of minutes
You’re thoughts have changed too

You look out and take a deep breath
Isn’t it beautiful?

© Jasmine N., Lyons, IL

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shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 5:50 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
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Mine is Lauren :) what grade r u in?
ilovetinkerbell GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 9:51 am
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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have a wonderful day

p.s. what is your real name? if i may ask. mine is Danielle
shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 9:35 am
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
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okay good :)
ilovetinkerbell GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 2:45 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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I will.

tink
ilovetinkerbell GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 7:06 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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okay i will
shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 5:49 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
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Laughing until your stomach hurts :)<br /> That&#039;s what friends are for &lt;3

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whoops. Haha I meant new and writing (in my previous comment) lol
shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 5:47 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
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Laughing until your stomach hurts :)<br /> That&#039;s what friends are for &lt;3

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Ya I have submitted one knew problem but i am waiting for editors approval. That is so cool you have submitted something. Be sure to tell me when they approve it. I know I will love reading it :)
ilovetinkerbell GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 3:35 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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hey. how has it been. have you written anymore latly? I have been waiting for more. i have written more but I am waiting for the editors to edit them and approve. well i gotta go. have a wonderful day.

tink.
shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2010 at 7:36 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
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Laughing until your stomach hurts :)<br /> That&#039;s what friends are for &lt;3

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Haha :) thanks. Ur really good too :)
angier GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 10:24 am
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
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I agree its really good ..but mostly creative , We need more people who can write like this !!
shabam34 GOLD said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 12:07 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
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Laughing until your stomach hurts :)<br /> That&#039;s what friends are for &lt;3

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Merry Christmas to u to! :) also Happy New year!!!! :)
ilovetinkerbell GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2009 at 9:53 am
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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I am glad i could help. have a merry Christmas.

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shabam34 GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 5:53 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
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thank you soo much!!!! you just made my day!!!!! :) thanx tink!
ilovetinkerbell GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 9:57 am
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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Great job. i love it . it is so relaxing. I love how described the sky. great job and keep up the work.

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