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It Is She

November 16, 2009
By ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."


Your divine beauty is one of mine;
You came to me with nothing but that exquisite smile.
Yet I can’t understand merely why you bring me so much,
Why those jade eyes in-prison me in delight.
How adequate. How enchanting. This all seems…
You’re a goddess of my dreams,
An angel so adorable and how you took me by surprise,
It left me awestruck in remark to the fact I want to call you mine.
Because trust me baby… I’ve already surrendered.


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ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Oct. 3 2012 at 10:10 am
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."

Thanks, I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you =] I appreciate the feedback, I most recently posted a new poem, If you wouldn't mind checking it out and rating it that'd be great =]. Again, Thank you.

on Jun. 8 2012 at 7:47 pm
I love this. You are one in a million and you can make anyone smile. Keep writing! 

ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 11:02 pm
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."

If I wrote this to about a girl, she wasn't worth remembering, and if I said those things about a girl I would remember, I wrote this piece two years ago almost, and someone has come along in my life, someone who this would apply to. So it more so maybe was a way of inspiring me or wishing for those things in a person. Which it hasn't happened.

KelliB GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 12:08 pm
KelliB GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
15 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
Decide that you want it more than you are afraid of it.<br /> - Bill Cosby

This is so cute!! I really like it. Any girl should just date someone that writes something like this about them. Is this about a real girl or just a random inspiration?

---Oh and i want to know the full story of your bio...not that i am a creeper but you did say that if we wanted to know more we could ask. It made me curious.:)---\

Keep it up!!!! Please return the favor and read/comment on any of mine


k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 7:16 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant.&quot; -Deepak Chopra

Incredible!!! What was your inspiration for this one?

on May. 11 2010 at 5:25 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell

awh! this was adorable!....

and very well written! 5/5 stars!!!