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dieing

November 17, 2009
By kaykay111692 GOLD, Kingman, Indiana
kaykay111692 GOLD, Kingman, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
one decision, no matter how big or small, can determine a lifetime of happiness or a lifetime of sorrow. or what doesn't kill you will only make you stronger.


Lieing on the ground watching the world become nothing but a dream.
Listening to the voices Disintegrate into thin air.
Trying to scream but nothing comes out.
My mind says move, but my body says NO!
Suddenly a faint vibration of the ground, then a glow above my limp body.
I feel myself raising and my limbs become mobile again.
As I look around to find my limp body still lying on the ground and me, I have become just another soul to pass on from this world.
Just another funeral for people to attend.


The author's comments:
this is my version of what is going to happen when i die. i will become nothing and be nothing. just another funeral.

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on May. 8 2010 at 10:35 pm
kaykay111692 GOLD, Kingman, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
one decision, no matter how big or small, can determine a lifetime of happiness or a lifetime of sorrow. or what doesn't kill you will only make you stronger.

thank you... its just my feelings at the time and i dont like to draw it out and make people read for an hour to get the point

on May. 7 2010 at 8:55 pm
georgiab PLATINUM, Whitman, Massachusetts
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i read another one of your poems and i liked it so much i read more of your poems, this one is AMAZING! great job! i like how they're all short and to the point