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Last Moments

November 17, 2009
By Stranger216 GOLD, Youngstown, Ohio
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Stranger216 GOLD, Youngstown, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
don't lose yourself in the world that is changing. make sure you don't change with it.

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as you whisper
sweet nothings into my ear
i drift asleep and
your words become unclear
my eyes are closed
and the darkness sinks in
then i start to forget
and then i begin
at then beginning
when my time first first started
but shortly after that
then we had parted
into my life
you came and went
for all the time
i had spent
holding onto you
without letting go
now that we are done
there is no show
for us to watch
to rewind and press play
because our love
has wasted away
so keep on living
and show others your love
because i just flat-lined...
and now im floating above...

© Justin A, E. Palestine, OH

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