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Star Dust

November 22, 2009
By teddychanfanatic2 SILVER, Montgomery, Alabama
teddychanfanatic2 SILVER, Montgomery, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
With God, all things are possible.


It’s falling from the sky
Dancing in the cool night
Air floating on the breeze
Whipping through the trees
Twirling swirling down
From heaven’s black gate
It falls to bless the heathen
Below gently falling blanketing
the ground turning everything white
and trenching it with purity like
tiny sprites they dance and melt
as they fall against my hot face.

The author's comments:
Wrote for school one day...

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on Dec. 14 2009 at 2:29 pm
teddychanfanatic2 SILVER, Montgomery, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
With God, all things are possible.

thank you! I wrote it in my Creative Writing class, we had to write a series of poetry on our topic of choice and i chose weatherand temperature. Thank You again <3<3<3!!!

on Dec. 14 2009 at 9:29 am
paradise-of-hell BRONZE, Georgetown, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When forever ends, something new always begins.

This was very beautiful, i would have liked to read more COMMENTS on your article..... yes you did write at school, but why- and why this topic? My favorite line though was "tine sprites they dance and melt"... KEEP WRITING!!!! youre good :)