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I'd Remember Him Better

November 30, 2009
By casey261 GOLD, Hainesport, New Jersey
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"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."

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I thought he was perfect,
With deep blue eyes
And a perfect smile.

Then he snapped my heart
Down to the core.

Now my only memories
Of him are what-ifs and
Remember-whens.

If only he hadn’t murdered
My heart, then maybe,
I’d remember him better.

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

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Kelli_2011 DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 28 2009 at 10:58 am
Kelli_2011 DIAMOND, Fillmore, California
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this too shall pass

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wooo girl i know what u are going through this is AWESOME!!!!