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December 7, 2009
By XxEmo_Gurl26xX BRONZE, Darien Center, New York
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XxEmo_Gurl26xX BRONZE, Darien Center, New York
3 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;hahaha. (:&quot;<br /> &quot;I love you more than ever &amp;&amp; ever. &quot;<br /> &quot;Why does he love me when he doesn&#039;t, even though he tells me he cares &amp; misses me??&quot;

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When she cries, it’s for you.
When you’re not with her, she doesn’t feel complete.
When you hold her hand, she doesn’t want you to let go.
When you call her baby or love, she knows she means everything to you.
When you hold her hand, she knows you’ll catch her when she falls.
When you hold her face when you kiss her, she knows she’s yours.
When you say forever and always, she believes you.
When you say you wouldn’t her, she trusts you with everything she’s got.
She loves you and she knows you love her too.
She’s got this feeling it’s going to last forever between you and her.
She thinks you got this feeling too.

© Shirley Y., Metuchen, NJ

The author's comments:
i wrote this poem beacause love and relationships and how people feel about their relationships inspired me to write this poem.
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Puppihotti125 SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 8:09 am
Puppihotti125 SILVER, Alexander, New York
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~Cinderella walked on broken glass. Sleeping Beauty let a whole lifetime pass. Belle fell in love with a hideous beast. Jasmine married a common thief. Ariel walked on land for love and life. Snow White barely escaped a knife. It was all about blood~

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welcome!!!
XxEmo_Gurl26xX BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 8:02 am
XxEmo_Gurl26xX BRONZE, Darien Center, New York
3 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;hahaha. (:&quot;<br /> &quot;I love you more than ever &amp;&amp; ever. &quot;<br /> &quot;Why does he love me when he doesn&#039;t, even though he tells me he cares &amp; misses me??&quot;

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awe, thanks. (:
Puppihotti125 SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 8:01 am
Puppihotti125 SILVER, Alexander, New York
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
~Cinderella walked on broken glass. Sleeping Beauty let a whole lifetime pass. Belle fell in love with a hideous beast. Jasmine married a common thief. Ariel walked on land for love and life. Snow White barely escaped a knife. It was all about blood~

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awh, i read this one at school! i loverz it!