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far and beyond
January 4, 2010
dost thou hear what i hear,dost thou see what i see?yes,but thou dost not see the beayty that i see.thou lookest at the outside, i lookest on the inside.thou lookest at what it appears to be,when i look far and beyond.thou hearest all sounds,but dost not stop to listen,i hearest every sound and recognize one from another.when you thinketh it noise,i thinketh it music.when you seeth it worthless,i seeth it beauty.Ye most learn to look and listen far and beyond.
© Grace L., Bacolod City, Philippines
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This article has 30 comments.
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:29 am
Thanks Bro, LOL :)
AmereMortal GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 10:40 am
great work I like very much.
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 7:08 pm
Thank-you so much for your comment!
It was very encouraging to me and sorry it took so long to get back at you.
And yes I would love to check out your work! Thanks again!
It was very encouraging to me and sorry it took so long to get back at you.
And yes I would love to check out your work! Thanks again!
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 7:01 pm
Yah I suppose it is a little confusing and the grammer is a little off, or should I say a lot. But thank-you for your comment!!!!!
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 5:52 pm
Thank you so much!!!!!!!
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 5:50 pm
Thank you for your comment. I wanted it to be old fashioned, thats why I did it like that.
Alphie0 said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 5:21 am
It's a lovely poem, very true.
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 1:17 pm
Thank you so much!!!!!!!!! I'm glad you liked it!!
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 1:15 pm
Thank you so much!!!!!!!! Your comment was very encouraging to me. I'm glad you liked it!!!!!!!
cass said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 10:22 am
this was so meaningful and deep. i loved it!!!!!!
marlina_dee93 said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 5:54 pm
This is really good! and you're so right. i like it. keep up the great work! =)
norasings said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 7:52 pm
this poem is really great!I like the way it makes me pause and think about God's view of us . I know very few people who really love their own self like God!
I really like the poem it is very. . . i don't really know a word for it but it really makes you think and really take a second look at life to see what we don't really appriciate but should. Like how you said what is noise to someones ears might be music to anothers. very beautiful.
* i would appriciate it if you would check my work thank you! *
love the poem 5 stars!
* i would appriciate it if you would check my work thank you! *
love the poem 5 stars!
I do like this poem, but I think you over dideth iteth oneth the useth of the Middle English verbs, if you know what I mean. :) This is excellently done, but when you revise it, remember that not every verb in Middle English hadeth the "eth" on the end.
Shambler92 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 8:24 pm
good poem, nice writing, but to me it would read better with modern english rather than the whole baroque approach of the writing, i think for this poem reaching the reader through words is the most important thing, and with the whole thou's and eth's it makes it a little bit harder to achieve. but, s**t, nice work.
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 3:24 pm
Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!! That comment was very encouraging to me! THANKS!!!!!!!!
mockingbirdsong GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 3:17 pm
Thanks for your instructions, yes they are helpful to me. I didn't think it mattered so much, but I can see I was wrong.I'm new to all this. I usually do all the things you recommended, but I thought if I did it this way I would be done faster and my grammer wouldn't really matter so much, but thanks for you advice!! :D
