Mindless without me? | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Mindless without me?

Mindless without me?

December 18, 2009
By Breee GOLD, Salina, Kansas
More by this author
Breee GOLD, Salina, Kansas
10 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you really love someone, you shouldnt have to work at it.&quot;<br /> -Vanessa Hudgens

View profile

Your mindless without me,
and yet you won't fight.
So i guess it's not ment to be,
if you don't think it's right.
Their not the only one,
and i know it's not me.
Life is a virtue,
so let us be free.
Get all the weight off your shoulders,
because i know it's a ton.
Don't be discouraged,
this battle will be won..

© Rebecca S., Coventry, RI

The author's comments:
I wrote this when i got mad at my friend... and he really likes me but the only thing holding US back is his mom and my friends...
I dont care about what they say at all... its just him.

tell me what you think and what i should improve on. (:
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Overcoming Stage Fright
By kiwi12 PLATINUM
Austin, Texas
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Backyard
By CarlyG GOLD
Emmaus, Pennsylvania
CarlyG GOLD, Emmaus, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never let the odds keep you from doing what you know in your heart you were meant to do.&quot; H. Jackson Brown Jr.

View profile
Poetry
Secret Crush
By C.J.H. BRONZE
Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
C.J.H. BRONZE, Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes the world tries ot knock it out of you. But I believe in music the way that some people believe in fairy tales.&quot; August Rush(2007)

View profile
Poetry
Arrival of Storm
By Anonymous
Poetry
Unreach Love
By C.J.H. BRONZE
Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
C.J.H. BRONZE, Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes the world tries ot knock it out of you. But I believe in music the way that some people believe in fairy tales.&quot; August Rush(2007)

View profile
Poetry
Diffrences
By Son`ador SILVER
Hamilton, Other
Son`ador SILVER, Hamilton, Other
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We all mess up sometimes,but if we make a conscious effort to do good more times than not, we&#039;ll be doing life right.&quot;<br /> Stephanie Perry Moore<br /> <br /> Life sucks, and then you die!!<br /> -Anonymous-

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 0 comments.