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December 20, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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I was thinking…
Will forever last?
If the sun does not shine, then I moon will
Never is not forever
A positive is just two negatives
Forever is eternity in other words never
Everything happens as a result from choosing
Sometimes a frown is not an upside down smile maybe its just a frown
You cannot change what has already happened…so why regret

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Ellie.M. PLATINUM said...
on May. 16 2010 at 9:32 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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Thanks :) that means a whole lot :)
k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 7:00 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant.&quot; -Deepak Chopra

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I really like that last line:) It's so powerful, the poem is good I'll admit but the last line, just really struck me. I think i'll make it my quote on my profile if you don't mind. It's just so beautiful I want to share it with whoever i can. I'll tell it to my friends and use it in conversation. Wow, i think you may have just changed my life with one small line. Thank you  :)
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 8:45 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

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I like the thought behind that. no I didnt get "blown away" or anything  but I really liked it.
Ellie.M. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:45 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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thank you so much.! :) You give me a lot of confidence.! Thanks :) i will be sure to read yours ive just been all so busy.!
Claire_Milan PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:16 pm
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Favorite Quote:
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so true. The last sentence blew me away. Thats the second piece of your's I have read and I think that I am on my way to becoming one of your biggest fans! You have me hooked! LOL