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This painful love

January 18, 2010
By falling-rain GOLD, Layton, Utah
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I try to show you my love,
but you will not open your eyes.
I try to give you my love,
but you will not open your arms.
i try to sing you my song,
but you will not listen.
I try to feed you my food,,
but you do not eat.
I've tryed my best,
to get you to see
that all i want from you,
is to love me.

© Emily O., Boynton Beach, FL

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Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2010 at 5:17 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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Great job i love this-wonderful and creative
SophiaOffing SILVER said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 9:36 pm
SophiaOffing SILVER, Gret, Michigan
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&ldquo;For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.&rdquo;<br /> ~Audrey Hepburn

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WOW! This is very powerful!!!