I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

First of all, I’d like to thank you for commenting so kindly toward my own works, I’d like to return the favor so….I’ve read all of your poems and they all seem to have this very subtle beauty kinda’ like you’re painting a picture with pure words and emotions guide the brushstrokes, but anyway…this one is my favorite I’ve fallen in love with this particular set of lines: “Love must be the bars-/Must be the bars,/

The bars that fight back” …I honestly have no idea what it means but I brings to mind some type of protective torture, but I personally never know what my ( or anyone else’s) poetry means I just judge on the basis of the emotions it provokes and your poetry is beautifully amazingly strong! Keep writing! :)