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January 21, 2010
By invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
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invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
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there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

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no matter how i move
no matter what i do
there's people always calling my name
i try to get away from the pain
i think i'm going insane
can you save me?
can you set free?

i don't understand
the thoughts running through my brain
can you make them go away?
you're the only one i know who can get close enough to me

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

The author's comments:
i actually wrote it straight out of my head. i was just thinking about all the craziness in my life.
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xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on May. 3 2010 at 8:03 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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oooo i really like this. itz kinda dark, which is really kewwl. very goodd!! keep writingg
Emily Wolfenden said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:28 pm

this poem is exactly how I feel sometimes. The only thing I find can solve it is a bath ;)

the structure is really good, and backs up the theme of over-analysing and craziness you're feeling.