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The Rain
January 28, 2010
The rain,
It falls upon my face
Blending with my tears,
The tears,
That fall,
Are for you,
But you will never care,
You will never glance my way,
And see how much I want,
for your smile to be for me,
Instead of someone else,
The storm it rages on,
And yet I feel no cold,
Nor can I ever really feel the sun,
The numbness,
overtakes me,
Just when I think I'm fine,
And so it will be,
That I am right here,
And as you are passing by,
You will not look into my eyes,
For you know what you will see,
The misery,
That is killing me,
And slowly,
Oh so slowly,
My heart is hardening,
So that one day,
When you do want me,
It is you I will not see.
© Hailey J., Lake Oswego, OR
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MoonlitxRose BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 11:17 am
Oh my goodness I love this poem! You made so deep and meaningful! I like how it's so relateable for every girl out there who happens to really like this guy and the guy doesn't notice or just doesn't feel the same way. This was well written! I like how you related the rain with tears that cascade down your face and how the rain blends in with your tears! AWESOME job on writing this! :)
melone96 said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 4:15 pm
LOVE IT!!!
broadwaylover432 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 10:51 am
this is great! I've definitely been here before.
Milo! said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:10 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
Oops! I accidently posted my reply to you as a new comment! Sorry, but anyways what it says is: Thank you SO much Papa! It means so much to me that you enjoy my writing! ( And it is SO cool that you made an account just so that you could comment on my poetry! It means a lot to me that you did. I love you!)
Papa said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:01 am
Dear lostinhim
I almost forgot to read your poem. Too much work and my intention was lost. You are truely gifted. You crawl deep inside yourself and pull out the deep thought and emotion that defines your writing. I remember little flower from long ago. Keep it up little flower, do what you love and love what you do. That is a gift from Him. love Papa
I almost forgot to read your poem. Too much work and my intention was lost. You are truely gifted. You crawl deep inside yourself and pull out the deep thought and emotion that defines your writing. I remember little flower from long ago. Keep it up little flower, do what you love and love what you do. That is a gift from Him. love Papa
