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Falling

February 2, 2010
By Roses_to_ashes_10 BRONZE, Conyers, Georgia
Roses_to_ashes_10 BRONZE, Conyers, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Be unique and dont follow the crowd"


Pull me close and tell me sweet things
Hold me and tell me I'm yours
Love me and TELL me you do
Happiness is the reason I'm here
You are my happiness, my world, my everything.
Itrust you with anything, with my life.
You are mine and i love you for that.
You love me for me and want me to be myself.
I was tryin' so hard not to but when i fell, i fell with my heart first, In love with you.


The author's comments:
i needed to write something happy for a change so this is about when i WAS happy.

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on Jun. 15 2010 at 3:19 pm
WhiteBear SILVER, Beckenham, Kent, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Darkness cannot drive out darkness, only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate, only love can do that.

I really liked this poem, it show a lot of emotion and feeling! my only suggestion would be to break up the last line to make the ending more effective. But apart from that it was great!! ;)

on Mar. 8 2010 at 7:01 am
Roses_to_ashes_10 BRONZE, Conyers, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be unique and dont follow the crowd"

love it . its amazing