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Fixiated Cry

February 2, 2010
By xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
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xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
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"It is not the length of life but the depth of life"- Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Gaze into my stare
You have no idea what it means
Untied at the seams
No obvious connection
You smile, I bleed
An ulcer that stabs through my linings
A hurt so serious
When I look to find you
You’re not there
I wish you knew how to catch my stare
Still you gaze…
At what you can’t understand
On the surface
Unable to immerse yourself in truth
Away; fading into me
Not looking at what you’re getting into
Shallow end of the stick-
Menacing huffs of air
Straining to fix the broken enigma
Still clothed, no sign of nakedness
It lies before you…
Comprehension never born
The shallow film consumes you

© Tabatha B., Peoria, IL

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DaniW PLATINUM said...
on May. 30 2010 at 9:16 am
DaniW PLATINUM, New Bern, North Carolina
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People are like stained-glass windows. They sparkle and shine when the sun is out but when the darkness sets in their true beauty is revealed only if there is light from within.<br /> By Elisabeth Kuebler-Ross

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Your work is so intense! You can feel every word as you read
Bullet2MyHead09 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 2:49 pm
Bullet2MyHead09 BRONZE, Portavogie, Other
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The moral this time is girls make boys cry..

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wow! amazing. i really like your work. it's really deep and expressive. and i love this poem! and thanks for checking out my work by the way. =)
xLpoet SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 6:22 am
xLpoet SILVER, Bristow, Virginia
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&quot;It is not the length of life but the depth of life&quot;- Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Thank you so much! I'll definently check out your work.
hope4you said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 2:26 pm
hope4you, Williamston, Michigan
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&quot;NEVER LET ANYONE MAKE YOU OUT TO BE LESS THAN WHO YOU TRULY ARE....STAY TRUE TO YOURSELF&quot;

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i like :) im amazed at your discription. keep writing, ill check them out for sure, check out my work