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Alone I Stand

February 14, 2010
By AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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I stand alone,
with no one to talk to.
No one wants to be my friend.

When teams are picked,
I am always last.
All alone is how I am.

No matter where I go,
not a second glance is cast.
People just think because I stand alone,I want to be alone.

© Kyle W., Pompton Plains, NJ

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AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 12:15 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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Thank you!I wrote it when i was feeling sad... So im glad that it seems sad. Thanks for commenting! I appreciate it! (:
MoonlitxRose BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 10:57 am
MoonlitxRose BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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"If at first you don't succeed, try again."

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AW! *Sob* That's sad! It's really good, but it's so sad! But in a way, I think anyone can relate to this and I like that. Nice job on writing this!
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:26 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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Thank you very much!
Poet4ever SILVER said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 4:59 pm
Poet4ever SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
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"Guilt by association is guilt nonetheless" CSI: New York

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yo my fellow idahoan! Great job. If you want any critsism what-so-ever, it would be that the last line might be too long, but i LOVe the poem. And i feel you, it sucks :(
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 5:04 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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so are you!! really :)
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:00 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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Thanks! You know you are like, so sweet.
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 9:15 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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Your work is more than great.. I really like it! All of it! :)
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 11:49 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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Thank you so much! It makes me feel good to know that other people can relate to my work.
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 9:37 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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I totally feel you!!

You know ur writing makes me feel like i belong to it.. I love this! so true

I like the part where u said people think just becuase i stand alone I want to be alone.. so touchable! great love it!!