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LovE is amazing

February 21, 2010
By iloveparamore BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
iloveparamore BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
1 article 8 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"dont rainon my parade\" \"i want to be his favorite hello&his hardest goodbye\"


love is a compassionate feeling
its like a flame that wont burn out
its the blood pumping through the heart
its sweeter then the taste of chocolate
love is so amazing that it makes you want to explode
ka boom!
love is a shining star you cant stop staring at
love is a thing, a feeling, an amazement you cant live without
love is not just a compassionate thing, it makes you happy
its like a bright color that wont fade away
its a flower that wont die
even like your frozen because the only thing moving is your heart beating
its something you cant forget
but forgetting something totally amazing is the worst feeling
love is amazing


The author's comments:
this free verse explains how someone can feel like when they are in love.

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on Mar. 2 2010 at 4:23 pm
iloveparamore BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
1 article 8 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"dont rainon my parade\" \"i want to be his favorite hello&his hardest goodbye\"

thank you very much! and i will look at your work:)

Han15 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:58 am
Han15 BRONZE, Doncaster, Other
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I like the way you chose free verse to explain how someone feels when in love. Keep writing!

Please rate my work and comment :) thanks.

Great job!