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February 22, 2010
By xLifexLovexBooksx GOLD, Carbondale, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Maybe my words, are not as good, as those on the page, quoted on the lips, but they are, my words, my soul, my life, and they are how they are, quoted or not."- Exert from a poem of mine titled "My Words"

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In the dark
Hands on your hips
You sway from their grip
As they tighten around your waist
Pull you down sharply
You gasp out loud
Lips trail down your neck
A hand in your hair
The smile stays
As the red swarms your face
Your body shakes
Hoping he cant feel
The need
You lean backwards
Into his chest
Feel his heart beat
Slow and steady as yours
Quickens
Breath in your ear
While he whispers to you
“I bet you wish this was real”
The vision cracks
Falling to pieces
And your back alone
Dreaming
Wishing
Waiting

© Katie S., Vineland, NJ

The author's comments:
I guess I wrote this because of an experience I had with someone, Its NOT supposed to sexual, just more of a... shocked sweetness, but a wishing that what was happening in your dreams was real.
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xLifexLovexBooksx GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 11:21 am
xLifexLovexBooksx GOLD, Carbondale, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Maybe my words, are not as good, as those on the page, quoted on the lips, but they are, my words, my soul, my life, and they are how they are, quoted or not.&quot;- Exert from a poem of mine titled &quot;My Words&quot;

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thanks, yeah its supposed to be like a dream :)
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 9:02 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

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I took it to be a dream... this is really pretty though...